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	<title>Comments on: Stop Wasting the Court&#8217;s Time with Poor Writing</title>
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		<title>By: kris</title>
		<link>http://legalgeekery.com/2009/10/07/stop-wasting-the-courts-time-with-poor-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-3631</link>
		<dc:creator>kris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Nov 2009 17:34:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brilliant.

Could someone please forward this to Orly Taitz.

Just sayin</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brilliant.</p>
<p>Could someone please forward this to Orly Taitz.</p>
<p>Just sayin</p>
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		<title>By: Stephen Carpenter</title>
		<link>http://legalgeekery.com/2009/10/07/stop-wasting-the-courts-time-with-poor-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-3202</link>
		<dc:creator>Stephen Carpenter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Oct 2009 19:50:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Actually, past tense passive voice is appropriate in many circumstances. Any circumstance where what happened is more important than who did it. On the other hand, it bothers some people. I have never really understood that, though I come from the belief that fixing problems is more important than fixing blame. Thats why I decided against going into law... the whole profession seems utterly at odds with that proposition.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Actually, past tense passive voice is appropriate in many circumstances. Any circumstance where what happened is more important than who did it. On the other hand, it bothers some people. I have never really understood that, though I come from the belief that fixing problems is more important than fixing blame. Thats why I decided against going into law&#8230; the whole profession seems utterly at odds with that proposition.</p>
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		<title>By: Joshua Auriemma</title>
		<link>http://legalgeekery.com/2009/10/07/stop-wasting-the-courts-time-with-poor-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-3201</link>
		<dc:creator>Joshua Auriemma</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Oct 2009 19:17:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Don&#039;t forget though that passive voice has the effect of calling attention to objects rather than actors, which can be very appropriate in brief writing. 

Ex.  The knife was left under the waste basket.</description>
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<p>Ex.  The knife was left under the waste basket.</p>
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